I spent part of today working on Heart.
I went back, read chapter one and then opened a
blank document and started writing it all over again.
Chapter one is complete. (in no way or sort proofed,
edited or polished)
Now I can't decide which way I like it. So I'm leaving
that up to everyone else. On my website I've posted
both versions of chapter one and a poll to see which
version everyone likes.
Head over and let me know.